
Closed my eyes and wished
The wind whisked my dreams away
Somewhere a weed grows
~*~
Β©οΈ2023 Paula Light and Light Motifs II. No unauthorized use permitted.
SenryΕ« written for dVerse Poets Pub Weed Appreciation Day.
Closed my eyes and wished
The wind whisked my dreams away
Somewhere a weed grows
~*~
Β©οΈ2023 Paula Light and Light Motifs II. No unauthorized use permitted.
SenryΕ« written for dVerse Poets Pub Weed Appreciation Day.
Perfecto
LikeLiked by 1 person
Gracias π©·
LikeLike
Your haiku is beautiful and thought-provoking. It captures the essence of letting go of our wishes and desires and trusting the winds of life to carry them away. Despite the uncertainty of its location, the image of the weed growing somewhere reminds me of the resilience and strength of nature. Thank you, Paula, for sharing your words with us. ππππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, Pankaj π©΅
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poetry. Masterful imagery!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! π₯°
LikeLiked by 1 person
A flowering weed I hope.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I imagine it flowering πͺ»
LikeLike
Lovely.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh, perfect. So much packed in – a seed itself!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! π₯°
LikeLike
Love this. Beautiful and simple.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Short and sweet, Paula, and I love the wuthering of the alliteration. As Sarah said, a haiku seed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful Haiku Paula βΊοΈπΊ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you π
LikeLike
Some versions of WordPress won’t let me “like.” (I had a WordPress account once through Blogjob; when Blogjob fell apart I had no access to the account.) So I have to type a comment just to say I liked it. Well, I liked it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! Sorry for your issues π
LikeLike
(liked)
LOL WordPress!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I could write some but
Today, laughing and taunting
Impish Muse flits by
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice π
LikeLike
Lovely haiku, Paula, and I imagine a flowering weed too. Some are really beautiful. π₯°
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Lauren π
LikeLike
A weed is a flower that’s growing in the wrong place (somebody once said said).
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awwww πͺ»
LikeLiked by 1 person