Imagine…

Woman in grey misty fog

You live in a world where no Gods exist.

Concrete surrounds you in a tedium of grey upon grey, under a steely sky promising rain that never comes. Even the trees have been stripped of color so as not to offend. There are no beeps, buzzes, barking, birdsong, or any possibility of irritation.

The bleak optics transcend your reality of freedom from suffering and struggling; perversely, they magnify your isolation to the point where this bespoke heaven feels like punishment.

When did I ask for this, you moan in despair, missing your flawed family, your annoying friends, and your stressful job. But no one is listening because interaction disappeared to eliminate conflict. You check your phone, hoping for at least a robocall, but those are gone too.

I didn’t mean it, you scream in a flurry of self-pity, and a grey cat materializes from the fog with a grey mouse in his mouth.

~*~
©️2023 Paula Light and Light Motifs II. No unauthorized use permitted.

Written for Reena’s Xploration Challenge 265.

39 responses to “Imagine…

  1. I am glad that you mase a new friend in this bleak place, as I know how much you love cats.

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  2. excellent as always Paula! 🤗

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  3. Brilliant write, Paula!

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  4. Deep thought, in.

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  5. Great use of so many prompts Paula. Thanks for joining in 🙂 🙂

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  6. Making pictures with your words again. Excellent!!

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  7. You seem to be in a bit of a gray mood.

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  8. A surreal scenario here Paula.

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  9. A chilling image and the picture is just right!

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  10. Grey takes the reader from peace to pathos.
    The line – “even trees are stripped of colour so as not to offend” is brilliant.

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  11. This is excellent!
    Have you ever read The Giver? I thought of it straight away.

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  12. I liked this! Now, this may be way off the mark, but it struck me (because I listened to some Bob Dylan last week) that your words could easily be the lyrics of a typical Bob Dylan, story-like, song. Especially the odd ending line.
    I read it through a few times, using Bob Dylan’s voice in my head to do so.
    I’d like to understand just what it is–is it the visuals that are called up? Or something else? Or just me? Am I having a Sixties flashback??

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    • It could be. I was thinking more of the “be careful what you wish for” concept combined with the song “Imagine” from John Lennon, which is what the prompt conjured up for me. Imagine no god, no pain, no conflict, no stress… just day after day of sameness. Oh and The Matrix too! At first the robots gave everyone paradise, but they were bored and didn’t produce enough brain energy or whatever the bots were feeding on…

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  13. This leaves an unsettling feeling, Paula…what a great write for the prompt, not to mention, thought-provoking.

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  14. I loved the theme. Without God there is a world without colour. No artistry, no creativity, no imagination, just the same dreary drudgery of everyday existence.

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