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Winter solstice candles light holiday

Twinkle cold
Dead stars flame out
The night shivers in its lonely orbit
Breath travels slowly in the frosty air
Home glows closer
Loving hearts

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Double tetractys written for the Skeptic’s Kaddish W3 34.

39 responses to “Welcome Home

  1. 2nd Doubler I’ve read today. Both great. Salute! I told Ken G I’d probably give one a try next week.

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  2. From distant cold dark to welcome warm light- a brilliant round trip in this double.

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  3. amazing Paula! I really enjoyed this one! Xx

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  4. wow, that is super clever, Paula! I was not expecting the ending to go in that direction.


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  5. A very lovely poem

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  6. You have the perfect name for your poem. 🙂 Onwards towards the warm lights. 🙂 Well done.

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  7. Well done! Love it! ❤️

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  8. I love the feeling of driving home here– refreshing!

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  9. That welcoming warmth and light – what we all need in this very cold weather!! This one resonates!

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  10. Hello Paula. I am about to let David know that I am selecting you to be the next Poet of the Week. I look forward to your challenge!

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  12. Hi, Paula 💖

    Just wanna let you know that your W3 is now live:

    W3 Prompt #35: Wea’ve Written Weekly



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