Magic sparkle flowers

Treasure beckons in a gorgeous dream,
Sparkling under an azure sky;
The moon is lit with magic.
Violet blossoms weep
With joy at my news:
A love story
Starring me
And you.
Alarm rings,
Breaking the spell
Of wishful thinking.
Back to the rain and gray
Reality I travel.
But on this ordinary train,
A man with violet eyes says hi.


Image from Lovethispic.
Poetry form: nonet/reverse nonet.

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27 responses to “Magic

  1. It’s so easy to fall in love. Buddy Holly and Linda Ronstadt know all about it.

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  2. Lovely double nonet, Paula, and with a magical ending. Thank you so much for joining in.

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  3. I had to google to find out what a nonet is, but nonet/reverse nonet is all kinds of fancy!

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  4. Beautiful! Ooohhh…that man with violet eyes!

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  5. Beautiful, dream like poem

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  6. Cool style, and a very cool poem! 🤩💕
    I’ve never seen violet eyes🤔

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  7. With the imagery and the poem you brought such beautiful words to life. Omg loved it

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  8. Oh, so nice! A little emotional roller coaster, with the happy possibilities at the end.🌷

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  9. Oh what a magical story, Paula! I like that promise of a happy ending too :>)

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  10. The gorgeous treasure = those violet eyes 😍

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  12. This is the best thing I’ve read all day! How very refreshing and optimistic! Loved how the whole format of the poem looked at the end. I “felt” the magic in your words…
    “Violet eyes” how very easy to visualise!

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  13. I literally “felt” the disappointment when the alarm rang
    Just like I could feel the magic in your words. This poem is so refreshing and optimistic. Love these vibes!

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