Breath [100 words]

I heard a song today that reminded me of you. It was about a man who collected hearts then ran… eventually he’d return for a second chance. When he kissed a girl, he stole her breath away, but he had ice in his veins. He remained unmoved by love and pain. I cried like I haven’t for a long, long time, my sadness reflected back at me from the ruins of my mind. Eventually, the song ended and I could breathe again. All was tranquil grey, clouds retreating to their space. The water may have rippled across a ghostly face.


Written for Lynn’s Tuesday Picture Prompt.

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10 responses to “Breath [100 words]

  1. Very evocative, the image and your response to it.

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  2. Oh so poignant!

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  3. Poignant bitter tears come to mind.

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  4. Love those last two lines Paula.

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  5. Pingback: Lynn’s Tuesday Picture Prompt #7 – A Reblog From Paula Light(Light Motifs II) – justabitfurther

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