A New Life [flash 201]

When she was a child, she played in a magic garden with a sparkling unicorn and a rainbow of butterflies. One day, she jumped in a glittering aqua pool and was pulled out by rough hands. Scared, she stared into an unfamiliar face.

“Foolish girl,” the old man said. “That river is dirty. Don’t go in there again.”

“What about my white horse?” she cried.

He laughed but not unkindly and returned her to the orphanage, where they punished her for escaping again. A few years later, they sent her out to work for a wealthy family to earn her keep. She cleaned their floors and sometimes was allowed to help in the kitchen, where she might stir a pot of sauce or cut up vegetables.

One day, she was in the driveway helping the chauffeur wax the white limo when the old man appeared, the one who pulled her from the river. He didn’t seem to recognize her however.

But when he walked past he commented, “When you’re eighteen you can get your license and learn to drive my limo. Maybe a car can replace the white horse you left behind and you can create a new life for yourself.”


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20 responses to “A New Life [flash 201]

  1. Wow. This is so clever Paula. A briliiant story.

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  2. Yay!! 😻
    Love the site name for the image. I have to agree.😀

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  3. A very intriguing story, Paula, and superb response to all prompts. Thank you so much for joining in. 😉

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  4. Reblogged this on BrewNSpew and commented:
    Sharing Paula’s take on the prompt –

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  5. Paula, this is truly wonderful. Lovely tale of hope! 💗

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  6. Good story Paula.

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  7. Very clever use of all of today’s prompts, Paula.

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  8. Love the idea of unicorns. Good story

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