ReVerse Ribbon

We kissed on the cold sand

Until the rains came.

When the world shattered,

I was a hunter’s prize,

Black lace, wet sheets.

The miles between us

Made it easier to lie,

Until I froze too.

We spiral down so far so fast;

I am the bag of broken glass.


ReVerse is a new poem created of one line each from a collection of older poetry. I took mine from some of the pieces in Going Dark, published in 2014. I learned about ReVerse at Kat’s blog.

This was also for Thursday Inspiration 7.

13 responses to “ReVerse Ribbon

  1. Wowzers! I love it Paula! Very good verses!

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  2. Very powerfully written! πŸ˜€ ❀

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  3. Amazing ReVerse Paula! I’m so glad you gave it a try. Stunning! πŸ™‚

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  4. It all works so well together

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  5. I really like this poem.

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